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I'm making a one shot comic using the public domain hero "Atoman" with a more human story. All thoughts are appreciated! Feedback is worth its weight in gold

Hey y'all 👋

I thought I'd go ahead and share one of my favorite panel sequence from the latest issue of my comic book, and I'd love to hear what you think about it.

Chapter one is FINALLY finished (with some changes to font and text size as suggested in previous feedback so thanks for that!) Does it flow ok and make sense? Would you make any vague assumptions about what he does for work after reading this? I can’t decide if I should make it obvious or if it’s better just being left as is and you don’t know. It probably looks different from the point of view of someone who’s read my novella this is a spin off from V someone who knows nothing about the original story. I don’t want people to have had to have read the novella to read this and my judgment, and that of most of my family and friends, is skewed as we are familiar with the characters.

https://globalcomix.com/c/xander-the-demon

The ash moves wrong.

The necklace reacts.

Gaia feels a presence before anyone sees it.

This is Page 1 of Ashes Under Silk — my dark fantasy manga built around mystery, legacy, and hidden power.

Prologue already live. Chapter 1 in progress now.)

Pages 1&2 dropping really soon

https://mangaplus-creators.jp/episodes/5q2604162324550027356957/#

Pages 1& 2 of chapter 1 will be released in two weeks we are currently doing a staggered release for chapter 1.

https://mangaplus-creators.jp/titles/mu2604162324550027356957

Hi everyone. A while ago, I posted a comic called The Devil of Pine 16 here and asked for advice, and the feedback I got was incredibly helpful. So I'm back again with a new comic to ask for your thoughts.

I'm happier with this one than I was with the previous comic, but storytelling still feels tricky to me. When I shared it in another subreddit, some people said it was too wordy.

For those of you who struggle with this too, how do you approach telling a story when you have more you want to say than the page or panel count can comfortablty hold?

Even if it's not about storytelling, please feel free to point out anything else you notice. Any advice would be a big help.

Hola a todos estoy queriendo hacer un web cómic Y la verdad es que el estilo de trazo sucio me gusta mucho siento que tiene bastante profundidad pero quisiera la recomendación de ustedes

Just finished inking the first 2 pages of my comic I've been cooking up. I think panel 4 of page 2 is a highlight!

Big question is is the font size and lettering a little too small? Maybe the balloons are too thick?

I think, maybe its time for a thumbmail change, because on the first pic, the coloring was done by AI, but on the second one, its done by me itself, so should I change it? (The third one is where the second image belonged from, let me know if it flows naturally, you read it right to left btw, The context is about the calling of embarking on a dangerous quest to a man who was about to give up his life)

Hello guys! I've recently posted a new oneshot I made to join a contest. I realized it mainly to practice, so any constructive feedback is very much appreciated!

The title comes from the Japanese Zen term 放下 (hōge), which means "to let go", to release what we hold onto, even when it hurts. It felt like the only right word for this story.

Here's Manga Plus link (but it's also available on Tapas, Webtoon and GlobalComix) > https://mangaplus-creators.jp/titles/dh2604131933380023770964

It would mean the world to me!

This is clearly a work in progress, but I plan to make it the first page of a comic. Ideally it’s representing a warehouse fire being lit, but theres something about it I really don’t like but can’t pinpoint what. The last panel will be blown out by flashlight light, but I’m not sure how to make it more dynamic/interesting. Any advice or anything that is working for it?