Looking for storytelling advice
Hi everyone. A while ago, I posted a comic called The Devil of Pine 16 here and asked for advice, and the feedback I got was incredibly helpful. So I'm back again with a new comic to ask for your thoughts.
I'm happier with this one than I was with the previous comic, but storytelling still feels tricky to me. When I shared it in another subreddit, some people said it was too wordy.
For those of you who struggle with this too, how do you approach telling a story when you have more you want to say than the page or panel count can comfortablty hold?
Even if it's not about storytelling, please feel free to point out anything else you notice. Any advice would be a big help.
u/Tuumen — 7 days ago