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Chapter one is FINALLY finished (with some changes to font and text size as suggested in previous feedback so thanks for that!) Does it flow ok and make sense? Would you make any vague assumptions about what he does for work after reading this? I can’t decide if I should make it obvious or if it’s better just being left as is and you don’t know. It probably looks different from the point of view of someone who’s read my novella this is a spin off from V someone who knows nothing about the original story. I don’t want people to have had to have read the novella to read this and my judgment, and that of most of my family and friends, is skewed as we are familiar with the characters.