
Third Issue of My Comic i'm looking for feedback and suggestions and reviews.
Hi everyone! I just finished the first issue of a comic I’ve been working on and wanted to share it here. It’s made in Google Slides and this is my first full issue. I’d really appreciate any feedback and suggestions for my story. https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1D7er3NBB-fciDAspqvmOF7tRmMa1IFgCCT0A4dHLhBM/edit?slide=id.p#slide=id.pthis is the link to it. Please give feedback I really need feedback, and what should i improve? I also linked the other issues too. I'd really appreciate feedback!
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