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Looking for some advice on a first page (inks only)
This is clearly a work in progress, but I plan to make it the first page of a comic. Ideally it’s representing a warehouse fire being lit, but theres something about it I really don’t like but can’t pinpoint what. The last panel will be blown out by flashlight light, but I’m not sure how to make it more dynamic/interesting. Any advice or anything that is working for it?
u/Wonderful_Two8962 — 7 days ago