The silence is louder than the screams that echo in my mind.

The factory smells like old metal and sadness. The hum of a machine, and the quiet sobs of the other girls is the only thing you can hear over the ringing they play so we can’t sleep. One thing to bring us joy and we can’t sleep. I can’t sleep. 

Even with the ringing, it’s so quiet. How can it be quiet and loud at the same time? 

I don’t know. 

All of a sudden, every single girl looks to the door. They’re nervous. I am too. 

The familiar stomp and tap of the king and queen’s shoes echo through the metal chamber. That noise that makes my breathing uneven every time I hear it. Everyone freezes. “Who should we pick today, my lovely wife?” the king booms in his gruff voice. The queen points to a selkie (one of the newer additions), an elf and… me. 

Shoot.

Not again. “No no no no no no” I whisper under my breath. “What was that?” A guard asks, grabbing me by my waist.

I fight the urge to shove his hands off of me and scream. 

“Glory to the royals.” I say instead.

We are led to another gray cold metal room. Before any real torture, we have to listen to the queen lecture us on why we are horrible and magic will be the end of humanity or whatever stupid thing she decides today. The Royals hate magic and anything that has to do with it because it makes them feel like they aren’t in control. That’s why I’m here. That’s why my parents aren’t.  I still hear the laughter. 

I still see the pitchforks and torches. 

I still feel the heat as I press myself against the wall.  I still smell the ash.

I’m a witch… and one of the king’s favorite toys. He likes to watch us step on hot coals or be locked in a bathtub filled with water. It brings the psycho pleasure. As we walk down the bright hallway to the torture room, the elf girl trips! I catch her just as a guard cocks his gun. No sudden movements are allowed because it seems like we’re trying to escape. As if we could even escape.

DING DING DING!

I snap my head up at the noise. It’s the auction bell! A sharp, memorable ring carries through the factory and the king rolls his eyes, disappointed he can’t torture us today. 

We hurry to the auction room and are put in boxes like some kind of doll. Some kind of plaything that they can do anything they want with. I haven’t been sold yet. The king and queen sell us for gold because only young magic users sell well. Older ones aren´t as easy to keep and they have more experience with magic which makes them more dangerous. I haven’t gotten picked because people want more interesting magic users like fairies or elves. A few girls are bought, including Paige, an elf I made friends with before in the factory. She has muted blonde hair and freckles sprinkle her face like cinnamon. When she is sold she seems sad, putting on a broken facade, but there’s a special twinkle in her eyes. Defiant. 

I see a man eye me and he writes something down. He smiles a sinister smile that shakes my spine and bids one hundred thousand gold to buy me. My heart drops to my stomach. A few others bid for me but he continues to up the amount of money. He ends up being the highest bidder, so I kneel next to him. I notice his maid glancing at me. Almost like she’s trying to get my attention. 

I shake the thought out of my head as a few more magical beings are sold and the auction ends. The man chuckles to himself as he drags me outside. He drags me and I’m tired. So tired of being treated like an object. Like a toy with no feelings.

His maid stops, looks at me with distaste, and says with a snarl, “Can I warn the witch about you to put her in her place?” He nods, grumbling a yes and walks to the carriage. The maid turns to me and cracks her knuckles. I flinch, expecting a slap to the face or worse. “Hi I’m Caty! What’s your name?” She asks and tilts her head. The kindness in her voice…it startles me. I haven’t heard that in a long time. It brings a small tear to the corner of my eye. I want to say, I lost my identity so long ago that saying my name does nothing for me. I’ve been broken-in, used, abused and all I want is my little house, with my little family back. Where everything in the world wasn’t wrong and I smiled. I actually smiled. 

“Luna.” I mumble instead.

“Hi Luna! Listen — I don’t have much time, but I’m gonna help you, okay?” Caty stares at me with kind eyes. She gives me an awkward hug and says, “Quick! Act like I was yelling at you!” I pretend to be scared of her as we walk back to the carriage. Two horses await at the front of the carriage. One of them has pure white fur whereas the others fur is as dark as the night sky. The man glares at us as we ride to who knows where. 

I published a (wildly overdue) follow up in a series, and decided to step up my marketing game and spend time and $ on targeted Amazon ads, FB ads, and BookBub. The results were interesting. Performance wise, would day modestly successful as far as getting the clicks, but the response was not what I expected. Sales wise, not impressive at all. However, KENP went way up. I translated that as those clicking through have Kindle Unlimited accounts and the ads made them interested to read my stuff.

But, people without KU were not motivated to purchase much. As the amount of $ authors get from KENP (no matter how great Amazon makes it sound...) is beer money at best, and disappointing from a financial POV at least.

So, from a reading POV I will say successful but from a $ POV, it was not. I'm most driven by the former vs the latter so I will say on balance, I'm happy about it. I got readers to read! Per usual, if you're in it for the $, you will likely not be happy.

Anyone have a similar experience? What ad/marketing vehicle worked for you and which did not?

(I know you can't plagiarise anything accidentally, but I hope people will know what I mean with this title 😅. Also this might be sort of a panic-ridden rant, but I'm just interested in people's thoughts on this subject)

Does anyone else have this horrible feeling of accidentally stealing another author's words - not full paragraphs or even sentences, but turns of phrase, jokes, unique descriptions?

I know my settings is distinctive (anyone else from the Balkans? :)), that my characters are fleshed out since their arcs are written from deeply personal experiences, and that my plot was at least interesting to a few beta readers.

But whenever I read a "good" or complex or interesting description / turn of phrase / joke I wrote, the thoughts creep in - did this really come from my brain? Or did I subconsciously sponge up another author's words and slap them into a different context?

I try to look up these phrases and sentences, but there are never any concrete results. Does anyone else stress themselves out like this? Have you discovered some sort of plagiarism checker that works specifically well for fiction? That would really put my mind at ease.

(Again, sorry for the evident panic. And before anyone asks, yes I have anxiety lol).

Hi Everyone! I love to write. It's my passion and joy! I've self-published several books, but for the life of me, I can't seem to get an audience. I know they exist, but I can't find them/or they can't find me. Amazon's algorithm has not been my friend. My books don't even show up when I specifically type my author name in the search bar. Now, I know most people say "social media" is the new and only way, and I'm trying digital methods, but I'm not on Facebook or TicTok. I do have a new Instagram account, and I (obviously) use Reddit. Perhaps I don't know how to use these sites properly. Can someone provide insight into what I might be doing wrong, please? Any thoughts would be much appreciated. Thank you.

I read somewhere in the giant swamp of info when I was looking into this, that you use the same ISBN# for both paperback & eBook versions of your book, but I see other people saying you need a unique one for each. Which is correct?

… that is the question.

I am really not great with social media, creating content, consistent posting etc. basically all the skills required for successful IG marketing. Has anyone had “success” without utilizing social media platforms? And by success I mean consistent enough sales that yield 4-5 figures in royalties or more?

Currently I sell via KDP and have consistent sales (but usually less 20 sales) per month. Been live for only 7 months so I see it as a good sign that I have any monthly sales at all. About half of them are overseas which is surprising but I’m glad to know my reach extends to other countries.

Anyways, I’m wondering if I really need to also be a content creator to turn the corner on more impactful sales numbers. Thoughts? Thanks!

I’m new to self publishing and I’m trying to figure out how to price my first book. I don’t want to charge too much, but also don’t want to charge too low. I’ve put time and effort into my writing, and I wanna make decent money from it.

How much budget did you had for your debut novel? Did you earn your money back?

For my debut I have budget and I would like not to pass the amount considering it’s a debut novel and I don’t know if it will sell

Has anyone recently purchased a block of 100 ISBNs from Bowker? I'm wondering if they've started assigning ISBNs with the 979 prefix (rather than the 978 prefix) for blocks of this size yet. Thanks!

Hey, everyone. First time posting. I’m looking to publish an ebook for certified teachers. I’ve worked internationally for over 10 years, 8 of those in China. My ebook would target Western teachers from Canada, the UK, US, etc looking to get a job teaching at a private international school in China. Is this too niche?

Edit: This isn’t for ESL/EAL teachers. It would be for holders of B.Ed, PGCE, etc.

Hi everyone,

I've been writing as a hobby for almost twenty years, and for the last two years, I've managed to organize my life to have the time and, most importantly, the mental space to take my writing more "seriously." So, last month I organized some texts I had and put together my first book. I self-published it through a publisher in Brazil (I'm Brazilian), and I also created an ebook in Portuguese and another in English and put them on Amazon. I did all this myself (me and the artificial intelligence, of course).

I already have a second book practically ready to publish and I have material for at least ten more.

Some questions: I intend to publish a book every 3 months, but I can only publish one per month, or one every 2 months. In your experience, is it better to publish as much as possible or to maintain a space between publications?

Also, do you recommend any platforms for promotion? I already have Medium, Substack, and Wattpad, where I publish some individual texts and try to promote the book in some way.

Thank you for your attention and good luck to us all.

Hi, everyone! This might be a silly question, but I couldn't find a definitive answer anywhere else.

In a work of fiction, is it legal to talk about a public domain book in not the best way? I'm not talking anything dramatic or super mean, but could a character say, for example, that they didn't like Pride and Prejudice because it's boring?

Also, would it be okay to use snippets of well-known quotes from public domain works without citing the source? For example, could I write something like 'She finally understood the whole half agony, half hope thing' or 'To be or not to be embarrassed?'

(It's 7 a.m. where I live, I know these examples aren't great, but bear with me😅). If anyone has any answers to my panic-ridden and confused rambles, I'd appreciate it a ton!

HIIIII

So I will be self publishing my first novel by the end of the year. I’m torn between using Mailerlite, Substack or Kit (formerly converterkit) as my newsletter platform.

I want to be able to have visibility and make it customizable but I don’t want to pay an arm and a leg and I hear that Mailerlite glitches a lot. I already have social media and will run a campaign to get people to initially sign up for my newsletter.

If you’ve used any of the above, please let me know why you do or don’t like it, the good the bad the ugly-all of it.

TIA!

A friend of a friend self-published his book in early 2025. He spent a huge amount of money on fiver editors, cover design and book layout but they honestly seem to have taken him for a ride as the final product looks very amateur. The release didn’t go well, a few in person sales to friends and a small number on Amazon which led to a single 1-star review on Goodreads and a 5-star from a colleague on Amazon.

The friend is now talking about trying for a rerelease, adding an extra chapter, going for a new (AI-generated) cover and focusing on social media posts to generate some more attention. Unfortunately he is already spending big money again ($500 for cover and $500 for marketing advice) at a time his job is looking unstable.

I can’t bear to see him spend such money so I asked that he pause the rerelease and let me have a read of the book (I have a couple of books out with about 3000 sales so thought I could offer a little guidance). Before offering any feedback I asked what he wanted to achieve with the book, if success was just getting a book out there or if he had specific sales or reception in mind. He replied 4 star average review and 10,000 sales, though admitted that he might need to address some of the typos he knew about in the initial release.

When I finally got a chance to read the first 10,000 words of the book, it was as bad as I had thought. It is honestly a 1- to 2-star book, with typos, purple prose, massive info dumps, changing tenses, modern language in a high fantasy book, lots of tropes etc. It honestly seems like the project needs to be shelved to work on something new or massively reworked. I’ve previously offered to workshop the book and help with edits but he insisted on rushing the publication, not wanting to risk getting negative feedback from others.

So I’m now in this awkward position of breaking the news to them. I put my thoughts and annotations in an email but my girlfriend says it is way too harsh so I haven’t hit send. Life is crazy busy at the moment meaning seeing him to discuss will be tricky.

How would you folks want to receive this feedback and do you have any tips on how to deliver it?

Hi, I've had an email, praising one of my books, which ends with:

"I lead a small private reading circle of thoughtful adult readers who enjoy discovering standout works across a variety of genres and leaving honest reviews on Goodreads. I would love to share your book with them. Would that be okay with you?"

Has anybody else has similar such emails.

My initial thought was 'why not', if I say no unless they night it through Amazon on a kindle, they can anyway.

But if i say yes, is that not giving 'them' carte blanch to pirate the book?

Does it even matter?

Okay, so I've seen a lot of back and forth about this. I've read all of the recent threads I could find, and it seems pretty mixed, leaning towards mostly indents for fiction. Personally, I prefer blocks over indents, but I'm fine to go with the norm if indents are the standard.

HOWEVER.

When I have a series of short dialogue exchanges, as below, I feel like it looks fine in block formatting but horrible with indents. Is that normal?

If so, how do I stop it from looking so bad? I'm using Atticus (regret) so only can choose between ALL indented or ALL line breaks.

Might switch to another epub builder.

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In her case, though, she chucks the grapes on the counter, turns tail, and rushes to her bedroom to hide.

“Em—what?” he calls after her in concern.

Fuck, how do I even explain this?

“I’m—I’m going to need a minute,” she confesses.

“Is everything okay?” he asks, approaching the door. She can hear the concern in his voice.

“No, it’s... You just look really different,” she confesses, covering her face as she leans against the door. There’s a pregnant pause.

“I do?” he asks in surprise. She catches a hint of amusement.

“I’m a little weird… like that…” she trails off.

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I am new at this and after months and months of working on my first book, hopefully I will have it officially published in the next couple of months. I’ve worked very hard to make it look like a high quality, traditionally-published book that I feel good about. I’ve had to learn a lot for the first time.

I don’t know anything about marketing and promoting and all that good stuff. I work full-time in something unrelated. I’ve had several other books in my head for a while now that are clamoring to come out. and I’d like to get started on them too.

Is it unrealistic to get going on another one now, before I need to take on the marketing of my first book? I know everybody may have a different view of this and you can market as much or as little as you want. I’m trying to get a sense of things and what more experienced people would advise. I’d rather not wait but I also want to be realistic. Thanks.

Hello! I’m gearing up for the release of my debut novel this August and I’m a bit confused regarding preorders.

I’ve been lurking on this sub for a while now and I’ve seen several folks saying that preorders are not a good idea since I’m an unknown author who has a very small social media presence (though hopefully that will continue to change throughout the summer).

But from my understanding I need to have my book available for preorder or live on Amazon so that it links to Goodreads and so my ARC team can leave early reviews.

Any clarity on this would be most appreciated because I feel like I need to do preorders for the afformentioned reasons but I don’t want to shoot myself in the foot come launch time.

Little advice to give you a headstart. If you're publishing on Amazon, you'll need to start a publishing page through KDP through your current Amazon. It does NOT expose your regular information, as long as you use a pen name. So you NOT have to create a separate Amazon.

For eBook you'll need to combine your book into something called an 'Interior File'. That's everything that comes after the cover. And you'll also need a cover page, which should be a PNG. So an the INTERIOR FILE and COVER PAGE.

Paperback is a little more difficult. You will need page numbers, page breaks for every chapter, no bleed margins, and a different format for cover photo. Now the cover photo for paperback can be a really BISH. The way I did it is I waited until Amazon had my interior file. Once that is done Amazon will tell you (based off your pages) how big your cover photo is expected to be. Take a Word document, change it to landscape mode, change the document to the expect 'Height' and 'Width' that Amazon told you your cover photo is expected to be, insert the cover picture, stretch it to fill all gaps (shouldn't be far) and save it as a PDF. Paperback on Amazon requires both the interior file AND the cover to be a PDF. Once you launch Preview Launcer your cover should fill perfectly within their margins. You will know if the cover is wrong because Amazon won't let you continue unless it's corrected.

Only other thing I can tell you is ENROLL IN KDP SELECT. It locks you into a 90-day "can only sell eBook on Amazon" thing but it does not lock your paperback. You can still sell your paperback anywhere. And when the 90 days is up you can sell your eBook anywhere.

Why is KDP Select important? Because it allows people who subscribe to Kindle Unlimited to read your book for free and you get paid PER PAGE. It isn't much, but anytime someone reads your book for the first time, you get paid per page.

So with Amazon you could essentially be getting paid by Kindle Unlimited page reads, eBook retail sales, and paperback sales.

One last thing, paperback is Print-On-Demand, so you pay NOTHING. Amazon takes the cost of printing the book out of the price you list it for. My book was around 670 pages. It cost $9.02 to print. I priced it at $19.99. I make $3-4 per book. Obviously, your book will be different, but this was just an example.

Hope this helps!

I just had a successful and fun author event at my local indie bookstore and thought I'd share what I did and what went well. So far I have 65 paperback sales for my book with no paid social media presence and no ARC reviews.

Step 1: Make connections in your community in advance

Making friends and getting into a good circle of book-lovers is so valuable, and not just as a writer. In the meantime, I became a regular customer of a local indie bookstore that had a vibe I enjoyed. I asked who to talk to about their self-published and local authors policy, and got introduced to the owner of the bookstore.

Step 2: Develop an engaging pitch

I was able to tell the owner of the bookstore about my short story collection in an engaging and concise way. I already knew the bookstore was involved with the local LGBTQ community and being a queer author writing speculative fiction about transformation meant I already had a connection to the store's mission. We arranged the book event on the spot and worked on setting a date.

Step 3: Invite widely and be personable

Self-explanatory. I invited friends, neighbors, and coworkers who might be interested in my art and gathered RSVPs. I also posted about my event on my personal and professional Instagram accounts. If you want random store-goers to be curious about your event, it helps to already have a small crowd in attendance to get things started.

Step 4: Have fun activities or a gimmick for the event

Since my short story collection has 10 stories, I got a small spinning prize wheel with 10 slots and printed off "fortunes" tailored to each of the stories. Curious store-goers could spin the wheel and get a unique "fortune" along with a description of the story and a QR code linking to my author website. This gimmick was a lot of fun and I highly recommend it. If I wrote a novel I would do this with characters or something instead. I also provided snacks at the event. Spent about $100 at Costco on charcuterie and fruit.

Step 5: Practice public speaking and be comfortable projecting your voice

Writing is a solitary activity but anyone in promotion should be comfortable with public speaking. Work on projecting your voice so people in the back of the crowd can hear you. Loosen up and have fun, and the people around you will sense your enthusiasm and good nature.

Step 6: Reading and then Q&A

When the crowd was big enough I brought my chair in front of everyone and read the opening of a story that was accessible and engaging, ending the passage on a cliffhanger after about 15 minutes. I then did a Q&A session about the book and about writing in general

Step 7: Thank all your attendees and your hosts and think of them first

You are a creative, but you are also a business. And to build your brand you have to think about providing for your customers. Make them feel special and appreciated and be personable. Make the activities and your reading tailored to what is engaging and fun for them and be gracious to your host and be helpful in the set up and take down.

Step 8: Make sure you have a good pen

My biggest regret is that I brought a pen from home that kinda sucked so my signings could've been better. I should've bought a nice pen to use for signatures. Oh well!

Everyone had a great time and I enjoyed the event immensely. The vast majority of my sales came from this single event, including 5-6 from people who just happened to be in the store that day without expecting an event. I also now have a partnership with this bookstore that will last well beyond this afternoon.

People talk in this sub about ARC reviews and buying social media ads but I needed none of it to get the sales I have so far. Never underestimate the power of good in-person connections when you have a quality, polished, edited book.