u/JudgmentOk6991

Game Title: Désorienté: Tales of the Small Intestine

Playable Link: https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Platform: PC / Windows

Description: Play as Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. This first chapter of "Tales of the Small Intestine" lays the foundation for this dark universe. Warning: The game is intentionally violent and contains strong language. I am currently improving Chapter 1 based on player feedback and fixing bugs before releasing the next chapter. I have dedicated a lot of time to the maps and overall atmosphere for total immersion in this brutal environment. I really need your honest feedback on the art direction and level design to help me improve the overall experience and make future chapters even better.

I modified the title screen, thumbnail, and facial expressions of the characters in the dialogues for better consistency.

Free-to-Play Status: [x] Free-to-play

Involvement: I am the sole developer.

​Hi,

https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

​I'm polishing chapter 1 of my RPG Maker project and I need your feedback to improve it.

​I changed the title screen, the thumbnail, and all the character facesets in the dialogues to make the atmosphere more consistent.

​I take all feedback, whether it's positive, neutral, or negative. Be honest, I just want to make it as good as possible.

Hello, I can't draw, so I used the character generator in RPG Marker. It's image 2, the smooth, clean one. I wanted to modify it using GIMP to try and make it more consistent with the atmosphere of my game, a psychological horror game. I'd like your opinion on which image to choose: image 1, the one I modified in GIMP, or image 2, the one created with the RPG Marker RTP software.

Thank you in advance for your help.

Play as Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. The game, titled Désorienté, follows the story of the 'Tales of the Small Intestine.' https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient Chapter 1 is available and includes:

The Tale of Rosette The Tale of Tieulle The Tale of Lierris Playtime: Approximately 1h to 2h30 (depending on your pace and exploration). Warning: The game is violent and contains vulgar language. I am currently improving Chapter 1 based on your feedback and fixing bugs before publishing the rest. Your opinions are valuable to improve the game.

you for playing and helping me enhance the experience.

Incarnez Ritournelle dans un monde violent où les intestins sont la seule monnaie. Le jeu, intitulé Désorienté, suit l'histoire des « Contes de l'Intestin Grêle ».

https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Le chapitre 1 est disponible et comprend :

Le Conte de Rosette

Le Conte de Tieulle

Playtime: Approximately 1h to 2h30 (depending on your pace and exploration).

Dernière mise à jour : J'ai amélioré la visibilité en réduisant le grain et le brouillard. La qualité visuelle du jeu est bien meilleure en jeu que sur les captures d'écran.

Avertissement : Le jeu est violent et contient un langage grossier. J'améliore actuellement le chapitre 1 en fonction de vos retours et je corrige les bugs avant la sortie du chapitre suivant. Vos commentaires sont essentiels pour améliorer le jeu.

Le jeu vient d'être mis à jour. Il est maintenant disponible au prix de 1,99 $.

Merci d'avoir joué et de m'aider à améliorer l'expérience.⁷

Incarnez Ritournelle dans un monde violent où les intestins sont la seule monnaie. Le jeu, intitulé Disoriented, suit l'histoire des « Contes de l'Intestin Grêle ».

Le chapitre 1 est disponible et comprend :

Le Conte de Rosette

Le Conte de Tieulle

Playtime: Approximately 1h to 2h30 (depending on your pace and exploration).

Dernière mise à jour : J'ai amélioré la visibilité en réduisant le grain et le brouillard. La qualité visuelle du jeu est bien meilleure en jeu que sur les captures d'écran.

Avertissement : Le jeu est violent et contient un langage cru. J'améliore actuellement le chapitre 1 en fonction de vos retours et je corrige les bugs avant la sortie du chapitre suivant. Vos retours sont essentiels pour l'amélioration du jeu.

Le jeu vient d'être mis à jour. Il est maintenant disponible au prix de 1,99 $.

Merci de jouer et de m'aider à améliorer l'expérience.

Take on the role of Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. The game, titled Désorienté, follows the story of the "Tales of the Small Intestine."

https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Chapter 1 is available and includes:

The Tale of Rosette

The Tale of Tieulle

Latest update: I've improved visibility by reducing grain and fog. The game's visual quality is much better in-game than in screenshots.

Warning: The game is violent and contains strong language. I'm currently improving Chapter 1 based on your feedback and fixing bugs before releasing the next chapter. Your feedback is invaluable for improving the game.

The game has just been updated. The game is now available for $1.99.

Thank you for playing and helping me improve the experience.

Incarnez Ritournelle dans un monde violent où les intestins sont la seule monnaie. Le jeu, intitulé Désorienté, suit l'histoire des « Contes de l'Intestin Grêle ».

https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Le chapitre 1 est disponible et comprend :

Le Conte de Rosette

Le Conte de Tieulle

Dernière mise à jour : J'ai amélioré la visibilité en réduisant le grain et en atténuant le brouillard. La qualité visuelle du jeu est bien meilleure en jeu que sur les captures d'écran.

Avertissement : Le jeu est violent et contient un langage vulgaire. J'améliore actuellement le chapitre 1 en fonction de vos retours et je corrige les bugs avant de publier la suite. Vos avis sont précieux pour améliorer le jeu.

Le jeu vient d'être mis à jour. Le jeu est désormais disponible en version payante à 1,99 $.

Merci d'avoir joué et de m'avoir aidé à améliorer l'expérience.

Game Title: Désorienté: Tales of the Small Intestine

Playable Link: https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Platform: PC / Windows

Description: Play as Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. This first chapter of "Tales of the Small Intestine" lays the foundation for this dark universe. Warning: The game is intentionally violent and contains strong language. I am currently improving Chapter 1 based on player feedback and fixing bugs before the release of the next chapter. I have dedicated a lot of time to the maps and overall atmosphere for total immersion in this brutal environment. I really need your honest feedback on the art direction and level design to help me improve the overall experience and make future chapters even better. Free-to-Play Status: [x] Free-to-play

Involvement: I am the sole developer.

Hey everyone. I've been working quite a bit on the visuals of my RPG: I reduced the fog opacity (from 110 to 90/255) and toned down the grain shader a bit (from 1.80 to 1.30/10) to make it look cleaner. Since this is a long-term project for me, I'd really appreciate your honest opinions on the art direction and whether it looks clearer this way.

Game Title: Désorienté: Tales of the Small Intestine

Playable Link: https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

Platform: PC / Windows

Description: Play as Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. This first chapter of "Tales of the Small Intestine" lays the foundation for this dark universe. Warning: The game is intentionally violent and contains strong language. I am currently improving Chapter 1 based on player feedback and fixing bugs before releasing the next chapter. I have dedicated a lot of time to the maps and overall atmosphere for total immersion in this brutal environment. I really need your honest feedback on the art direction and level design to help me improve the overall experience and make future chapters even better.

Free-to-Play Status: [x] Free-to-play

Involvement: I am the sole developer.

Game Title: Désorienté :Tales of the Small Intestine

​Playable Link: https://erophenice.itch.io/dsorient

​Platform: PC / Windows

​Description: Play as Ritournelle in a violent world where intestines are the only currency. This is the first chapter of 'Tales of the Small Intestine,' which lays the foundations of this dark universe. Please be warned: the game is intentionally violent and contains vulgar language. I am currently improving Chapter 1 based on player feedback and fixing bugs before publishing the rest of the story. I have spent a lot of time working on the maps and the general atmosphere to make the player feel truly immersed in this gritty environment. I really need your honest opinions on the art direction and the level design to help me enhance the overall experience and make the next chapters even better.

​Free to Play Status: [x] Free to play

​Involvement: I am the solo developer.

Hello, I'm fine-tuning my game and would just like to get some feedback on the art direction and atmosphere of several maps to improve them. Please be honest, thank you.