u/gittmill

Hi! I recently did a full rebrand of my Etsy shop and went through every listing to improve it—photos, descriptions, titles, and overall consistency.

Shop: https://paperhartsdesign.etsy.com

I’m currently averaging about 2 sales per week, and I feel like I should be doing better after all the updates.

What I’ve already worked on:

• Cohesive branding across the shop
• New listing photos/mockups
• Auditing what to keep vs. improve

I’d love honest feedback from both buyers and sellers on:

• Would you click or buy any of these listings? If not, why?
• Which listing stands out the most? Which would you skip?
• Do the products feel unique or easy to find elsewhere?
• Is pricing reasonable for what you’re seeing?
• What would make this shop more appealing or trustworthy?

Trying to figure out what to double down on vs. what needs to change—really appreciate any honest input.

Hi! I recently did a full rebrand of my Etsy shop and went through every listing to improve it—photos, descriptions, titles, and overall consistency.

Shop: https://paperhartsdesign.etsy.com

I’m currently averaging about 2 sales per week, and I feel like I should be doing better after all the updates.

What I’ve already worked on:

• Cohesive branding across the shop
• New listing photos/mockups
• Auditing what to keep vs. improve

I’d love honest feedback from both buyers and sellers on:

• Would you click or buy any of these listings? If not, why?
• Which listing stands out the most? Which would you skip?
• Do the products feel unique or easy to find elsewhere?
• Is pricing reasonable for what you’re seeing?
• What would make this shop more appealing or trustworthy?

Trying to figure out what to double down on vs. what needs to change—really appreciate any honest input.

Hey everyone, I recently did a full overhaul of my Shopify store and would really appreciate some direct, honest feedback.

Site: paperhartsdesign.com

I updated:

• Branding (colors, fonts, overall aesthetic)
• Product photos and listing structure
• Homepage layout + mobile experience
• Product descriptions (trying to improve clarity + conversions)

My goal is to start pushing traffic (TikTok + possibly ads), but I don’t want to waste money if the site itself isn’t converting.

I’m specifically looking for feedback on:

• First impression / trust factor
• Mobile experience (especially hero + navigation)
• Product page clarity and conversion potential
• Anything that feels confusing, weak, or unnecessary

I’m also aware a few designs may fall into gray areas IP-wise and I’m actively working on refining my catalog—so feedback beyond that would be really helpful.

I’m open to blunt feedback—would rather fix things now than guess later.

Hi everyone — I’m looking for blunt, honest feedback because something clearly isn’t working.

I run a small online shop selling stickers, bookmarks, and similar products. I’ve been consistently posting on Instagram and TikTok, and I’m starting to get some views/engagement, but my sales are basically nonexistent.

Here’s my site: paperhartsdesign.com

A few things I’m trying to figure out:

- Is this a traffic problem or a conversion problem?

- Does my product feel too saturated/overdone?

- Is my branding/pricing off?

- Are my product pages weak (photos, descriptions, etc.)?

- Does it feel like something you’d actually buy, or just scroll past?

For context:

- I post regularly on TikTok (packing orders, making products, etc.)

- I’m trying to follow trends + use hooks

- I haven’t run paid ads yet, but I’m considering TikTok ads or Meta ads

If you were in my position, what would you fix first before even thinking about ads?

Also — if you have run ads for a small product-based business, what actually worked for you? (platform, budget, type of content, etc.)

I’m open to tough feedback — I’d rather hear the truth than keep guessing.

Thanks in advance!

Hi everyone — I’m looking for blunt, honest feedback because something clearly isn’t working.

I run a small online shop selling stickers, bookmarks, and similar products. I’ve been consistently posting on Instagram and TikTok, and I’m starting to get some views/engagement, but my sales are basically nonexistent.

Here’s my site: paperhartsdesign.com

A few things I’m trying to figure out:

- Is this a traffic problem or a conversion problem?

- Does my product feel too saturated/overdone?

- Is my branding/pricing off?

- Are my product pages weak (photos, descriptions, etc.)?

- Does it feel like something you’d actually buy, or just scroll past?

For context:

- I post regularly on TikTok (packing orders, making products, etc.)

- I’m trying to follow trends + use hooks

- I haven’t run paid ads yet, but I’m considering TikTok ads or Meta ads

If you were in my position, what would you fix first before even thinking about ads?

Also — if you have run ads for a small product-based business, what actually worked for you? (platform, budget, type of content, etc.)

I’m open to tough feedback — I’d rather hear the truth than keep guessing.

Thanks in advance!