This is the prelude to a grimdark/dark fantasy novel I’ve been working on. I’m aiming for an ancient mythic tone similar to a historical legend being retold. Mainly looking for feedback on:
- whether the prose flows well
- if the lore is understandable
- whether the opening feels intriguing or too exposition-heavy
Hey yall, I've recently gotten back into Overwatch after not playing for 2 years, so yea im kinda washed atm. Im plat 1 tank and plat 2 on support.
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After work I often feel really disconnected. Like I’m home, but not mentally “in” my life for a while.
I zone out, lose track of time, and feel kind of emotionally flat. It’s not exactly relaxation it’s more like my brain is offline. The things I loved to do I can't find comfort in them.
I’m not sure if this is just burnout, stress, or something else. Does anyone else experience this after work?
After work I often feel really disconnected. Like I’m home, but not mentally “in” my life for a while.
I zone out, lose track of time, and feel kind of emotionally flat. It’s not exactly relaxation it’s more like my brain is offline. The things I loved to do I can't find comfort in them.
I’m not sure if this is just burnout, stress, or something else. Does anyone else experience this after work?