r/SongwritingPrompts

Lots of feelings this weekend. Lots of tension in the air. Too many innocent souls gone in Louisiana today. Just writing my feelings.

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I’m looking for feedback on this song I started writing

Shadows

Terrified in the middle of the night, wake up in a cold sweat and I see the shadows as they lurk. Stare down at my trembling hands, and all I see is the blood of all those I’ve hurt. I’m running down a dark hallway, looking for that spark from once before, but I can’t see it anymore. suddenly I’m falling down a dark, dark pit. I try to get out, but I can’t see shit. i’m dying just from trying to get a grip, but I’m starting to slip. cause I don’t know if I’ll ever make it out alive. I don’t know if I’ll ever sleep at night. I don’t know if I’ll ever be all right. cuz theirs no running from the shadows tonight. don’t even try to put up a fight. you’ll never make it out alive. Tell me where these nightmares end.