u/HellRose44

I’m looking for feedback on this song I started writing

Shadows

Terrified in the middle of the night, wake up in a cold sweat and I see the shadows as they lurk. Stare down at my trembling hands, and all I see is the blood of all those I’ve hurt. I’m running down a dark hallway, looking for that spark from once before, but I can’t see it anymore. suddenly I’m falling down a dark, dark pit. I try to get out, but I can’t see shit. i’m dying just from trying to get a grip, but I’m starting to slip. cause I don’t know if I’ll ever make it out alive. I don’t know if I’ll ever sleep at night. I don’t know if I’ll ever be all right. cuz theirs no running from the shadows tonight. don’t even try to put up a fight. you’ll never make it out alive. Tell me where these nightmares end. 

Do you ever feel like nobody understands you? Well if this is you please choose 3 songs from one artist or band that you feel truly represents you. Next find someone like a family member, friend or partner And have them find 3 songs each of you put head phones and just listen to the other persons songs. it doesn’t matter if you don’t like just listen to it. you’ll start to be able to understand the other person more start to see things from their point of view. After all The songs have been listened to look at the other person really look at them with fresh eyes. See if you start to understand their situation better this is called pulling from your heart help you through tough times.

for any animators who are looking to collaborate for a story idea reach out pls. here is the season one rough draft file:///var/mobile/Library/SMS/Attachments/c9/09/2C6CDF31-BB1D-423D-8ADC-0EA02631B1FD/Neon%20and%20nightshade.pdf