r/Songwriting

Still working out a few kinks - this one's "Moonlight Merlot". Keen for any feedback or suggestions

u/itsdanz0r — 4 hours ago

I need some tips

My girlfriend really loves music, like more than anything and I want to write her a song. It is my first song and I need some tips. Anything is appreciated

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u/SwimmingPirate727 — 11 hours ago

At the False Door (second song I've written)

Sorry, this song is about losing one of my cats. I know my voice isn't good, I'll work on it. I am new to this.

Lyrics:

A needle sinks into
Your bandaged leg
Turns your eyes
To enamelled pearls

A lady dressed in white
Begins to check
Your gold watch
Worn under fur

Nile reeds
Bow before the barque
Which was a plastic tray
Seconds ago

Shaven headed priests
Begin to march
Halt before
The underwaters flow

I paid for this
I thought it best
All agreed
But even so

Whimsies vanish
Leave me bereft
Of lines less trite
Than "everything must go"

The Queen of Sheba chicken mousse is dead
And reigns forever where the pharaohs tread

u/nicegrimace — 11 hours ago

CALLING ANY MIDWEST EMO OR ACOUSTIC EMO WRITERS!!!

i am try to write a song for my girlfriend for her birthday. now don’t get me wrong the song is 100 percent going to sound terrible but i would still like the lyrics to be good. the issue is I CANT WRITE MUSIC. i mean i had a little rapping phase in 5th grade but lets js say theirs a reason i wiped it off the internet. i am terrible at turning my thoughts into words. me and her love midwest emo and post hardcore music so i think it would be a silly gift to give her a cd with me covering a whole bunch of out favorite songs and it sounding terrible but i would like to sneak it a song in their that actually means something. i mean i think i have a decent voice according to me driving alone at night. but IM GETTING OFF TRACK!!! if there are any song writers out their that are willing to help my cause that at familiar to midwest emo please dm me.!!!!

thank you for reading byeee guyssss.

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u/Mindless-Tap-5140 — 3 hours ago

Nashville songwriters are watching AI artists chart on Billboard with lyrics a Berklee professor called "not particularly detailed"

Yesterday AFP published a report that's been picked up globally. Four fully AI-generated country artists are among the most-streamed in the US. None of them wrote a single lyric by hand.

What's alarming for songwriters: a Berklee professor said the prompts used to generate AI country songs were "not particularly detailed." The genre's predictability did most of the work.

Country songwriter Nicole Jordan put it bluntly: "The lyrics aren't as deep as they used to be. A big portion of popular country music has become kind of shallow, so that is pretty easy to duplicate."

Breaking Rust hit #1 on Billboard Country Digital Song Sales. It took roughly 2,500 downloads. The project has 2.4M monthly Spotify listeners and is not registered with BMI or ASCAP.

The silver lining: there's a new wave of country artists going back to the "old school way" of showing real emotion. Jordan says that will be harder for AI to duplicate.

Full story: https://www.votemyai.com/blog/ai-country-music-takeover.html

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u/Sensitive_Artist7460 — 5 hours ago

Putting my feelings into lyrics

I've been struggling a lot lately with my mental health and I can't get my feelings out. Usually what I'll do is learn a song on guitar that explains how I'm feeling, but there is no song that I've been able to find that explains me at this point in time.

How do I put my feelings into lyrics? I'm not great with words and when I write my feelings down, it's very literal.

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u/Responsible_Oil1975 — 14 hours ago

I have trouble coming up with chord progressions on guitar

I produce music as a hobby and on piano or digitally it is easy for me to try new chords and experiment. But I feel stuck on guitar. If I stick to a scale I have 7 chords, but they feel the same and basic. Then even if I add a 7nth or something it just seems basic

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u/KnownCommunication32 — 17 hours ago

Day 18 of 30 | I challenged myself to record one topline every day

I’m a French artist making R&B, Rap/Hip-hop in English.

I realized I needed to get more consistent with my music,

so I started this 30-day challenge.

Just focusing on getting better, one topline at a time.

Day 18

PS : I try to topline with a friend 😊

u/Good_Freedom27 — 16 hours ago

Now that I’m attempting performing my songs (still from home) … I’ve noticed a lot of the songs are difficult. Do you guys write with performance in mind ?

I didn’t for a long time until now .

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u/papapop365 — 18 hours ago
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Alt/rock guitar instrumental — Potential collab?

Made this instrumental track and was looking to see if anyone would be interested in adding lyrics/vocals. Any feedback is welcome of course!

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u/OldBeautiful1 — 2 days ago

Does it matter what usb interface I use if I want to record songs to my laptop? (And what are some good cheap ones)

Im new to recording songs but I’m just curious how much it matters.

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u/PUMAAAAAAAAAAAA — 15 hours ago

reasons i’ll go to hell (song I wrote and am a little unsure on)

i know my singing isn’t the best, but other than me missing some of the notes, does my voice suit the song?

u/calvinyl — 16 hours ago
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Y'all had some very helpful insight when I posted the acoustic version of this, so here is the current draft of "Let It Crumble." With usual caveat that I'm not really a singer.

It takes a lot to make a world

Six days of hard labor plus a rib to make a girl

God built man a garden and then he set him free

He only asked him not to touch the fruit of one damn tree

But man's so weak that if he know there's something he can't touch

It eats that man alive it makes him want that thing so much

He can blame the woman, blame the snake or blame the fruit

Bend over backwards not to see he's at the root

God said I built paradise to give this man a home

But let it crumble if it can't stand on its own

It takes a lot to build a house

The labor of your body and the patience of your spouse

A strong and smooth foundation just to hold the thing in place

Wood and brick and shingles so the rain won't splash your face

Then you maintain and fix it one disaster at a time

You keep the water out the basement with the soil's small incline

You keep an eye for cracks lest what you built will slip away

You give the yard attention when you're home each Saturday

It's just frame it doesn't know when it's become a home

It will crumble if it can't stand on its own

It takes a lot to build up trust

Communication time and lots of patience is a must

For some it might take years for it to settle into place

But in just a moment it can fade without a trace

'Cause man's so weak that if he knows there's something he can't touch

It eats that man alive it makes him want that thing so much

He'll blame two women long before he takes a look inside

But once he's flushed his life away there's nowhere he can hide

She said I wasted years with you to try and build a home

Let it crumble if it can't stand on its own

u/Hail_Yondalla — 1 day ago

Trying to merge two opposing genres...

So i really wanna make music.. i really enjoy psychedelic rap (think travis scott) and would love to create similar songs (i really enjoy the rage and trippy beats aspect of it, especially in drugs you should try it and Maria im drunk).. Problem is my voice.. I have a very soft feminine sounding voice and I CANNOT rap for shit.. my voice is just too soft.. Think lana del rey if she had no vocal training... I really do enjoy her music as well and wouldnt mind making something similar (lyrically and musically, especially with her more ethereal sounding songs, such as west coast) but i just loveeee the psychedelic rap aspect of music... I feel like if i can somehow find a way to merge both these styles aesthetically, It could really work but i really dont know how that would work out... sorry for the rambling, any advice is appreciated!!

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u/Vegetable-Mine3238 — 11 hours ago
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19 of 50 - Gimme Some Time

"Tell me a story that takes me away, not forever but just for a day a few moments in time to live, that aren't mine"

Thanks for your time.

Have a nice Easter.

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u/ZanettiConfetti — 4 days ago
Week