u/romeo2008lp

Hello people ! Very recently i’ve posted a homemade detachment i made in order to collect some feedbacks, now it’s done, here it is !

Feel free to criticize if you think something is unbalanced or if there’s a grammar problem.

Everything here is made by me, the stratagems, enhancements, detachement rule, and lore burbs EXCEPT the art, and i wrote from who it was made by under it :D

This detachment was made with in mind another commonly used tactic by the IWs, grinding down people till it work ! So there’s a huge focus on cheap units like cultists and traitor guardsmen alongside a playstyle that is more like a burst of damage that need preparation and placement.

Ok so recently i tried to make an homebrew IW detachment, one of the things im not proud of is that because english is not my first language, i wasn’t confident enough to find lore sentences to go with every stratagem, every enhancement and all, so i did something terrible, i used AI. not for the ideas or the rules just for the lore burbs and i wanna change it as soon as possible so here i am asking for help, for anyone who got an idea, even a slight one of some small lore sentences to put on my homebrew detachment (im probably not clear here so watch the photos you’ll get it).

What i am asking for is help to find lore burbs to fill in the blanks, they must be tied to the stratagem/enhancement it represents but even ideas will be greatly appreciated, thanks in advance !

So this detachment was made for Iron Warriors based on one of their casual tactics : grinding down infantry to learn about ennemy and exterminate him afterwards :D

I tried to make it as clear and balanced as possible and i’ll be glad to answer questions or take feedbacks whether bad or good. Hope you’ll like !

Also, i’ll be as transparent as possible, the lore texts are made by AI re-arranged by me to conform to what it’s connected, truly sorry i had to use that but else it was going to take me hours to find the good text and the good grammar. However, the stratagems, detachment rule and enhancements are all made by me with some help and reviews from my friends if that can reassure you.

So this detachment was made for Iron Warriors based on one of their casual tactics : grinding down infantry to learn about ennemy and exterminate him afterwards :D

I tried to make it as clear and balanced as possible and i’ll be glad to answer questions or take feedbacks whether bad or good. Hope you’ll like !

Also, i’ll be as transparent as possible, the lore texts are made by AI re-arranged by me to conform to what it’s connected, truly sorry i had to use that but else it was going to take me hours to find the good text and the good grammar. However, the stratagems, detachment rule and enhancements are all made by me with some help and reviews from my friends if that can reassure you.

Hello ! I wanted to know, what does the arrow icon (circled in red on the pic) and the text underlined in red means ? I know there are multiples different options for both and if anyone know what they mean i’ll be thankful