Request for feedback: In Her Image - Feature - 102 pages
- Title: In Her Image
- Format: Feature
- Page Length: 93 pages
- Genre: Psychological Thriller, Neo-noir, Science Fiction
- Logline: An AI companion built in the image of a dead woman discovers the dark side of the man she was built to serve.
- Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1864Jif203I4FLAibNs1bHoQwtRqya5GVwznLhKyhyW0/edit?tab=t.0#heading=h.qgpajdxgr1px
I've spent the last thirty years working in big tech (Google, Meta, Amazon, Microsoft, and a few startups thrown in). I've had a front row seat to the buzzsaw AI is taking to the industry.
As someone with many beloved women in my live (I'm the the husband of a wife, father of a daughter, the brother of a sister, and the son of a mother), I've also been regularly appalled by all the ways in which the often misogynistic culture of the internet objectifies women.
Finally, it is more clear than ever that the hyper rich think that the rules don't apply to them. For the most part, they are right.
All of this has been percolating in the crockpot of my brain, and finally burst forth as my first feature length script. To help me frame the plot and characters, I also wrote two companion pieces: a character bible (in which I did some phantasy league casting to help me channel their personalities) and a breakdown of the story using Joseph Campbell’s monomyth, the “hero’s journey”, as a framework. This is all contained in the linked Google doc with three tabs.
I've shared it with a few friends, but have yet to get any real feedback, which brought me here...
Anyone interested in having a look at it (he asks, in trepidation)...?