u/SayianBatra

Hello guys, I’m creating my own anime world “Batra the Savior” I have a full Volume 1 completed and I believe it’s pretty decent. It centers around 3 main protagonists (Batra, Raxion, and Chex) they have powers but in my world they are called forces. Batra has Astra Force, Raxion has Umbra force, and Chex has Zoul force. Well Astra, Umbra, and Zoul were primordial brothers who created all but disagreed at the end on the final outcome of everything. Umbra kills off Zoul sending his essence and powers to find a vessel(unknowingly) and as Umbra is about to deliver the finishing blow on Astra he completes this spell that kills both of them off sending their powers and essence to find new vessels. Well long story short the vessels will eventually unite under 1 team creating the first anomaly.. Beings are watching and they are not pleased, so they are making preparations and adjusting! If you’re interested in more just DM me! I also have a discord with a small team that I’m currently building. Message me if you’re WILLING to join. Thank you all🤝

Exploring a new universe concept: Astra, Umbra, and Zoul Forces shaping a divided world

Hey everyone! I’m developing a new original world called **Batra: The Savior**, and I’d love feedback from a worldbuilding perspective.
Here’s the core foundation of the universe:
**The Three Cosmic Forces**
The world is shaped by three primal energies:
**Astra Force**
A luminous, ordered cosmic energy that chooses a vessel meant to protect balance.
**Umbra Force**
A chaotic, shadow-born counterpart with its own chosen vessel, pushing the world toward collapse or rebirth.
**Zoul Force**
A rare, unstable “third path” force that rewrites the rules of both Astra and Umbra, feared because it can awaken in unpredictable ways.
These forces aren’t just powers. They influence culture, religion, warfare, and social hierarchy across the world.
**The Conflict**
Two vessels awaken around the same time, each tied to opposing cosmic forces. Their emergence fractures nations, divides belief systems, and draws hidden factions out of the shadows.
The world is trying to understand whether these forces will bring salvation, destruction, or something entirely new.
**What I’m looking for**
I’m mainly here for **worldbuilding feedback**:
How to deepen the cultures shaped by these forces
Ideas for how the world would react to chosen vessels
Input on political, religious, or societal fallout
If anyone enjoys discussing cosmic-energy-based worlds or early-stage universe building, I’d love to hear your thoughts.
If the conversation flows well, I’m also open to connecting with people who like building worlds together.
Thanks for reading, and I appreciate any critique or ideas!

Hey everyone ✨

I’m building an original universe and I’ve hit that fun but chaotic stage where my three main protagonists are solid in concept, but they need deeper shaping — personality layers, arcs, backgrounds, the little sparks that make them feel alive on the page.

Alongside them, I’ve got a full squad that plays a major role in the story’s core conflict, and I want them to feel just as intentional and memorable instead of turning into background furniture.

I’m looking for feedback, brainstorming partners, or anyone who enjoys helping craft characters with depth, dynamics, and that “you’re gonna remember this one” energy.

If you love worldbuilding, character psychology, squad chemistry, or power system design, I’d appreciate your eyes and ideas. I can share what I’ve built so far and we can shape the rest together.

Thanks in advance 🖤🔥
Let’s cook something dope.
You may DM me or join my discord https://discord.gg/A7htwyaVf

Hey everyone,
I’m building an original action/supernatural comic series called “Batra: The Savior.” It’s an anime-inspired universe centered around three cosmic forces—Astra, Umbra, and Zoul—and a protagonist caught in the middle of a collapsing balance between them.
I’m currently looking for artist collaborators to help bring this world to life visually.

ABOUT THE PROJECT
Batra: The Savior is a character-driven action series with a supernatural / cosmic conflict core.
Genre: Action / Supernatural / Cosmic Fantasy
Tone: Dark, emotional, high-energy combat and transformation-driven storytelling
Core Forces: Astra (creation/light), Umbra (destruction/shadow), Zoul (mysterious balancing force)
Format: Digital comic series with structured volumes (long-term story)

WHAT I’M LOOKING FOR
Comic page artists / illustrators
Line artists comfortable with action scenes and stylized energy effects
People open to long-term creative collaboration
Artists interested in building a new original universe from the ground up

CURRENT STATUS
Core worldbuilding, characters, and power systems are already developed
Volume 1 structure is planned
Actively looking to begin visual development and page creation

IMPORTANT
This is currently an unpaid collaboration.
I’m a new independent creator building this project from scratch, so I’m looking for people who are interested in portfolio work, collaboration, or growing with the project creatively.

HOW TO REACH OUT
If you’re interested, comment or DM me with:
Your art style / examples
What role you’d want (line art, pages, character design, etc.)
Any questions about the project

Thanks for reading 🙏
Let’s build something visually insane together.

I’ve been quietly building a full comic-style anime universe called Batra: The Savior. It’s a story about two opposing vessels of a cosmic force — Batra vs Raxion — and a world where power isn’t just strength, but identity, memory, and corruption.
The story follows:
A fractured squad forming under pressure
A world shaped by an ancient force called the Astra Force
“Chosen vessels” who don’t always want what they were chosen for
And a long build toward a conflict that feels more personal than heroic
Volume 1 is fully structured in comic panel format already, but I’m trying to figure out something important:
Does this actually feel like something people would read? Or am I just too deep in my own world?
If you like:
Jujutsu Kaisen-style tension
Attack on Titan-scale worldbuilding
Goku vs Vegeta rivalry energy
I’d love your honest thoughts.
I can post sample panels if people want.

I’ve been quietly building an original anime universe called Batra: The Savior, and I finally decided to share it with other creators instead of just keeping it in my notes.

It’s a long-form story universe centered around a chosen vessel named Batra, a system of opposing forces, and a growing cast of characters that evolve across multi-season arcs. The world includes layered lore, transformations, and rival characters designed to feel like they could belong in a high-stakes anime saga.

Right now I’m still in early development and refining everything — story structure, character depth, pacing, and world rules. I’m not looking for praise, I’m genuinely trying to improve it.

If you’re into anime-style storytelling, worldbuilding, or character design, I’d really appreciate any feedback, questions, or critiques. Even small thoughts help me shape it better.

If anyone’s interested, I can share sample chapters or character breakdowns next.

Thanks for reading.