u/SaltGoat7120

Image 1 — Excerpt- Asylum ‘60s Mystery
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Excerpt- Asylum ‘60s Mystery

TW// out-dated mental health treatment.

Do the characters feel realistic? Is the pace alright? Is it too confusing/ convoluted? Is the reveal alright? Does personality/ the horror/ the side affects of the treatment come across?

Merci pour ton aide!! :)

u/SaltGoat7120 — 7 hours ago

Trying to create an air of mystery + accurately describe mental health treatments 1960s

Any crit welcome!

I’ve done my research. ECT and ICT usage in England. But I wanted to make sure it reads alright! I’d be interested how you view the characters! And if you are invested! Thank you!

u/SaltGoat7120 — 1 day ago

Doc says be prepared to get mental issues?

I’ve been housebound for four years (so far) since I was 16. Unfortunately with physical health problems, that tie in to how I got how PTSD in the first place.

At my latest appointment Doc said if I get better I need to be prepared to get a lot of therapy and lots of ‘trauma.’ Even hinted at new mental health issues.

So now whats the point of getting better? I want a future, not one where I’m still struggling with more issues. Still running.

She thinks I’m thick, I understand this is not going to be easy on my brain, but she framed it like it was inevitable and even suggested I will more than likely get more physical issues because of the stress.

I feel a bit crushed? Everyone’s giving up on me already. And my mum (who is so supportive and kind) sat me down yesterday and said she doesn’t know what to do with me anymore.

I’m so tired.

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u/SaltGoat7120 — 5 days ago