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I feel Project Garden Eden, um, might have had more problems than initially presented. Something I was thinking about the developer's original death orders and chapter one of the official release is it feels a lot like chapter one's a bit of a middle finger to the original developer. Evo points out to just be a regular. The two masterminds killed instantly. A lot of the writing, um, tends to sort of be like, ha, how ridiculous, mentioning stuff from the original concept. I wonder if, because the original team lead didn't leave on good terms, it was a bit more of a get back at the team lead, and it was sort of just, because they were motivated more by revenge, um, and getting back at him, that's part of the reason, um... I'm not really sure what I'm trying to say, but basically. I feel um a lot of the, okay, take chapter 2 for example. The original team lead wanted, um, pirate guy to be kind and caring, whereas chapter 2 would have made him into someone who doesn't really care for anyone but the crew. And even then, he's willing to lie and deceive his own crew. And I think that's just such a character assassination. And it goes on and on. Um, Mark's fell suicide, and the last two chapters, four and five, are just the chapter four of Tetro Dangorompa pink. Furthermore, um, a lot of this stuff, I feel, is just trying to add insult to injury, or just... Okay, so like, um, Kara, in the original version, she's the mastermind's victim, meaning we're getting clues about the mastermind as we solve her murder. Meanwhile, um, it's just Wolfgang's dad, who, other than the blackmail, we never see, and Wolfgang dies too early for us to learn anything substantial about him. Just to clarify, I like chapter one, but to say, um, that the fan game would have been good, and I feel the problem is the death order. You're sort of having to character assassinate. The way I would have done it, I would have had the pirate, Gayle Ulysses, because he's turning everyone to basically slaves, and the targets were Ulysses and Umona. Umona, um, I don't know, does something a bit cowardly, Ulysses dies. That's how I would have done it. In this version, you just sort of made him a murderer who accidentally killed a guy who was basically torturing his quote-unquote crew. It goes on and on. I don't know, I think as well as that, it's just the fact that staff left so quickly once the VA was kicked.

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