u/ElijahThompson24

so for the past couple weeks i’ve been writing this screenplay, but for the past few days ive been really interested in this new idea i’ve come up. that is more unique, exciting and works better. it follows a better, more clear 3 act structure. i have the full outline of the movie. but i don’t t want to abandon this current project, as i have a tendency to do and then once i get onto this next project do the same for that one once i get a new idea. what’s the best thing to do in this kind of scenario?

first draft, unfinished. new to screenwriting.
google drive - https://drive.google.com/file/d/11l2wqOpW6I9r-WTBhc3Aod7jGjMMbW6Z/view?usp=drivesdk

link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZQOz22UUaQMdeeNahfRpk3x4g55\_0Iwf/view?usp=drivesdk

i’m very new to screenwriting,

this is the first draft and obviously unfinished.

please no comments on “we see” or “camera moves” as i plan to direct this short. any feedback would be greatly appreciated!