r/shayri

hi, new to the sub.

As i have already mentioned, i want to learn writing shayris. I know isn't easy as it sounds and also needs to have good grip on the words.

but its okay I'll give it a try, maine jaun elia sunn liya shayad padh bhi lunga 😭.

please guide as you think suitable. Thank You

Tum

Tumhare chehre ki taabish mein chand jaisa noor hai,

Tumhari muskurahat jaise subh ki pehli kiran ka suroor hai.

Siyah zulfen tumhari, jaise koi behta aabshaar ho,

Main pyaasa bhatakta hoon, jaise tum hi meri qaraar ho.

Wahi aabshaar-e-zulf ab mere liye ik jaal hai,

Wahi noor-e-chehra ab meri maut ka sawaal hai.

Main bhatakta raha teri galiyon mein ik umr magar,

Ab thak kar so gaya hoon, yehi mera haal-e-malaal hai.

Ab Tumhare aks ko dil mein basa kar, mene khud ko mita liya,

Isi pyaas ke kasht mein, maut ka zeher mila liya.

Rafta-rafta meri saansein, teri yaadon mein fanaa huin,

Humne thak kar ab andheri qabr mein bistar laga liya.

Ab mere dil ko khane aaye hain mitti ke ye keede,

Magar har nivala unhe teri mohabbat ka sukoon de raha hai.

Mere lahu mein ghula hai, tere aks ka wo zaika,

Ke unko ab mujh mein sirf tera hi suroor mil raha hai.

Bas yehi meri dastaan thi, yehi mera ikhtitaam hai,

Main khatam hua, par mera ishq unke liye ek inaam hai.

kitni shiddat se chaha hoga maine tujhe

jo tujhe ab dekhne se bhi dar lgta hai

Usko bat nhi karni ati mujhse

Ja rahi thi chod ke, Asu aye the

Chehra gira tha uska ghin se

Pukarta raha band dewaro mei

Chupke dur rota raha bahane se

Uske bare mei bolne se darta hu

Kahi kuch bol kr rone lag jau jor se

Nafrat itni hai tereliye ki khudko hi kosta rehta

Kya itna masoom hu mei muskurakr roya tha

Dar lagne laga hai haseen chehro se

Har kisi ki masoomiyat mei

Kyu salo bad nahi ubhar paya mei

Savere ki rat ko likhta raha ye resh mei