u/warmasterD

Hey folks — I’m usually a ghost story writer, but I’ve always wanted to take a proper swing at fantasy.

I’m trying it out on Pocket FM since the format suits how I write (short chapters, roughly 1.5k–2k words). I come from a fantasy/RPG background (D&D and the like), so it felt like a good fit to finally give it a go.

The story’s called Marked by the Dragon’s Eye. If anyone’s up for it, I’d really appreciate honest feedback on the first 4 episodes — what’s working, what isn’t, and what you’d change. If you think I’m wasting my time, tell me that too.
Thanks in advance.

https://pocketfm.com/show/marked-by-the-dragons-eye-english/8e2e5c06140562b69dd7f70aba67c46e0026a69e

u/warmasterD — 12 days ago