u/sowito17

so, i've been building same build game after game in jungle, id like to know what should and what can i build with diana, ive been doing d&d into riftmaker, liandry and zhonyas

Hi, I’m working on a short film script and I could really use some help.

I’m 19 and just starting to build a small acting/filmmaking group (for now it’s basically just me and one more actor), so the script needs to be simple to film — ideally 1 or 2 actors max.

The scene I’m working on is set on a sidewalk at night, and the topic is heavy (suicide). I want it to feel raw, real, and honest — not cliché or overly dramatic — something that actually connects with people my age.

Right now, I feel like the dialogue is okay, but it doesn’t hit hard emotionally. It feels kind of empty, and I want it to really land.

I’m open to:

• feedback on my current script
• rewriting/improving dialogue
• or even completely new ideas/scripts that fit these limitations

The goal is to create something that feels real for our generation.

If anyone is willing to help, I’d really appreciate it. I can share what I have here or DM it.

Thanks 🙏