u/namaste9295

Hey everyone,

I recently made a short film and I’d really appreciate your feedback.

🎬 What I’m looking for:

- Story clarity

- Editing & pacing

- Overall impact

- feedback

This is my first/one of my early projects, so any suggestions or criticism will really help me improve.

Here’s the link:

👉

https://youtu.be/PvLRTvaCf5s?si=xYv8ZcAKAOKqV88B

Thanks a lot for taking the time to watch 🙌