Blurb help - romantasy
Hi everyone! I am getting closer to the release of my book and I have two blurbs, but I don't know which is better. Please let me know your thoughts!
Holly Jesterspawn was forced into Magnum’s School of Sorcery. For anyone else, it would be a privilege, but for her, it might be a death sentence because unbeknownst to most, she does not have magic.
Third year and current top student, Rogue Enderbright, one of the few people who knows of her plight, promised to help her survive her schooling. The rest of the school though, seems determined to see through their deceptions – like Dolian Crestfallen, heir to the throne of a hated nation and the only student who can give Rogue a run for his money.
She’ll need every edge she can get and without sorcery, she will have to learn who among her friends she can trust.
Yet, everyday that passes, Holly begins to suspect there is more going on in the school and the faculty may even be in on it.
Deception, secrets, trust. Magnum’s School of Sorcery is not for the weak and Holly is stepping through the doors and everyone is watching.
Holly Jesterspawn should never have been admitted to Magnum’s School of Sorcery.
She has a secret—one that would get her killed if anyone found out: She has no magic.
In a school where power is everything, Holly is nothing.
Her only ally is Rogue Enderbright, the academy’s top student—and the only one who knows the truth. But even he can’t protect her from Dolian Crestfallen, a ruthless rival who’s watching her a little too closely—because at Magnum’s, secrets don’t stay buried.
As suspicion grows and alliances crack, Holly must survive a deadly game without the one thing everyone else relies on*.*
When she uncovers something far darker lurking within the school, one thing becomes clear: At Magnum’s School of Sorcery, it’s not just the students who are dangerous.