u/Visual-Perspective44

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Working on my second draft of a five-page animated comedy short, really giving it my first serious try.

Title: Something to say

Pages: 5

Genre: Comedy / Animation

LOGLINE:

A dog lover’s quiet night at home takes a bizarre turn after he wakes to an unexpected confrontation.

I usually go for horror, thriller, and action, but I’m trying out comedy for the first time to broaden my horizons.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1blhQVK2jcMr7nnP6fDQX4z6RM8bO-IvJ/view?usp=sharing

I hope you enjoy.

And of course, thank you for reading.

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Title: KILLER ODDS (PILOT)

Genre: Action / Thriller

Pages: 23 out of 60.

Logline:

When a covert hitman wins the lottery, he decides to leave the agency that controls him, triggering a lockdown that forces him to fight his way out of the building alive.

Just looking for overall thoughts and whether you’d continue.

As always, I appreciate you reading.

Jaye.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fKd4_xxxXzxwyCWP-nauVA_jqEbLb43W/view?usp=sharing

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u/Visual-Perspective44 — 16 days ago

Title: KILLER ODDS (PILOT)

Genre: Action / Thriller

Pages: 23 out of 60.

Logline:

When a covert hitman wins the lottery, he decides to leave the agency that controls him, triggering a lockdown that forces him to fight his way out of the building alive.

Just looking for overall thoughts and whether you’d continue.

As always, I appreciate you reading.

Jaye.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fKd4_xxxXzxwyCWP-nauVA_jqEbLb43W/view?usp=sharing

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u/Visual-Perspective44 — 18 days ago