u/Suspicious-Twist4379

I've got a few poems I want his constructive criticism on, and I was wondering if anyone knows how to summon him or manifest him into my dreams or just get him to inspire me. I have a fedora hat, would that be needed? Have any ideas?/j

I've got a few poems I want his constructive criticism on, and I was wondering if anyone knows how to summon him or manifest him into my dreams or just get him to inspire me. I have a fedora hat, would that be needed? Have any ideas?/j

As the seasons go by, I think of you, that Spring we spent together.

That Spring was not our first, nor had I thought it would be our last.

Why did it end so soon?

I remember your smile, though your face itself fades in my memory.

Your smile was so bright, I could only think you were feeling better.

Why must a smile be a painful mask for true feelings?

There we climbed a majestic willow, its branches reaching over a calm lake.

You promised we would come back next spring.

But you already knew, didn't you?

We visited that old abandoned house, and pretended it was a castle.

Why did you pretend?

You lied.

Why did you do it?

It's my fault.

Why didn't I know?

Why didn't I stop you?

Why couldn't I stop you?

Why did I let you leave the world behind?

Why didn't I know?

Spring won't come for you once more.

Spring won't come once more for me either.

And I will embrace you very soon.

(Hi there! I'm a beginner poet and quite young, and it would mean the world to me if you could provide some constructive criticism on my poem! Thanks in advance!)