u/Season_Cookie

I'm trying to get advice on the story of my webcomic but nobody seems to be willing to read it. i wonder if i might be asking for too much?

it'd be helpful if someone could read at the least the first episode and give me thoughts, thank you!

Link: https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/a-tales-hollow/page-1-a-wide-awakening/viewer?title_no=871532&episode_no=1

https://preview.redd.it/r291cb5s5xtg1.png?width=1280&format=png&auto=webp&s=7e2e89a6d11951395b082a27180ea12e8641134a