u/Sad-Olive6587

This is a very rough draft, but is it worth continuing with this or should I skip the prologue and start with chapter one? The rest of the story is 3rd Person Limited POV with three characters. The footnotes are very clunky since I haven’t revised them and I'm not definitive on what to reveal just yet about the world.

Would you continue reading? Should I get rid of the footnotes and add them as endnotes? Is this boring? Is it intriguing? Any advice is appreciated and welcomed!

I know my writing is not great. It’s been a while since I’ve written anything out of enjoyment. I usually illustrate and paint short stories/ webcomics. But any valid criticism (that isn’t borderline bullying) is appreciated.

genre: sci-fi, fantasy