u/Rhiyxnnxh

Image 1 — Is this version better? First EFL teaching job
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Is this version better? First EFL teaching job

Implemented some changes as recommended (thanks again). What else could I change?

Heard somewhere that including LinkedIn was advisory - I only recently completed my linkedin profile after having it dormant for ages, I can't see myself actively using it so is it really necessary to be on there?

- Got rid of irrelevant experience

- Bullet point-ed the personal statement

- Made key skills closer related to what the recruiter wants

- Removed the columns (kept it in education because I think it looks better - correct if wrong)

- Added more quantifiers and condensed info about each position held

u/Rhiyxnnxh — 1 day ago