u/Remarkable-Map-1254

Critique wanted for this
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Critique wanted for this

Hello! I am really curious about your opinion on this drawing. This is BY FAR my best one yet. For the first time it doesn't look really flat (I hope at least) and I am happy how I drew full body for the first time as well. I know that hair looks like a bit like medusa, but honestly I kind of like it. So if you have anything to say, literally anything, I would appreciate it :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 9 hours ago
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Critique would be appreciated!

Hello! This time I wanted to change my style a little bit. I didn't use lineart at all for this one and I wanted to make more smudged and messy style as you can see on the snake above. I know that hair doesn't make any sense, but i quite like it honestly, only thing that gives me headache in advance is render of that. Soo, i'd like to hear your opinion on proportions (especially left hand since it very tricky to draw, I am yet to add fingers on right one). Also as little as it is rendered, I'd like to hear your opinion on snake's head, and if you have any advice or tip for that style I would be very happy! Be as honest as you want to be :). Thanks for reading all the way down here :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 5 days ago

Critique would be appreciated

Hello! This time I wanted to change my style a little bit. I didn't use lineart at all for this one and I wanted to make more smudged and messy style as you can see on the snake above. I know that hair doesn't make any sense, but i quite like it honestly, only thing that gives me headache in advance is render of that. Soo, i'd like to hear your opinion on proportions (especially left hand since it very tricky to draw, I am yet to add fingers on right one). Also as little as it is rendered, I'd like to hear your opinion on snake's head, and if you have any advice or tip for that style I would be very happy! Thanks for reading all the way down here :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 7 days ago

Critique would be appreciated

What do you think of this so far? I know that hair doesn't make much sense, but I imagined like strong winds all around her so hair would fly all over. I Want to change my style a bit, so I didn't use lineart for this one. Only thing that "scares" me is the hand holding the staff. But if you have time, I'd like to hear your opinion on proportions, face, and hair as well! I am really proud of this for now :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 8 days ago

Critique/advice would be appreciated

Hello! This is my first time drawing full body, but as well hair like this. This is probably too complex for my level, but i want to do my best. I saw some people drawing whole piece without lineart and just color like this, so i tried with hair and I like it! So my question is if I should do this to whole body and circles behind so it looks the same as hair or do it the way I started. Also I used to follow hair strands that I have drawn with thin black brush, but this time hair is fully mixed up with one color and I have no idea how to render it. So If you have an advice on how to render it, I would be more than happy! Also, I’d like to hear your critique on proportions and hair, but mostly the face, not sure if it looks good.I am so sorry for long text… (Second picture is my reference)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 9 days ago

Advice would be appreciated

Hello! This is my first time drawing full body, but as well hair like this. This is probably too complex for my level, but i want to do my best. I saw some people drawing whole piece without lineart and just color like this, so i tried with hair and I like it! So my question is if I should do this to whole body and circles behind so it looks the same as hair or do it the way I started. Also I used to follow hair strands that I have drawn with thin black brush, but this time hair is fully mixed up with one color and I have no idea how to render it. So If you have an advice on how to render it, I would be more than happy! Also I'd like to point out that until now (7 months since first drawing) I only copied what other people drew (I didn't trace, I just used it as a reference. This time I wanted to be more original. I am so sorry for long text...

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 9 days ago

Critique would be appreciated

Hello! This is my first time drawing full body, and obviously its terrible. I am very embarrassed to post this here, but how I believe that I can learn faster this way. Soo I am curious, what can be improved here? That leg behind is giving me headaches so I just put it there, as someone told me "first make it exist then make it better later". Arm holding the wand is too big, but waving arm is too thin! Maybe I shouldn't draw her proportions perfectly since she will be in her dress? I would like feedback on this drawing so far, just don't tell me that I should throw it out of the window please :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 10 days ago

Critique would be appreciated

Hello! This is my first time drawing full body, and obviously its terrible. I am very embarrassed to post this here, but how I believe that I can learn faster this way. Soo I am curious, what can be improved here? That leg behind is giving me headaches so I just put it there, as someone told me "first make it exist then make it better later". Arm holding the wand is too big, but waving arm is too thin! Maybe I shouldn't draw her proportions perfectly since she will be in her dress? I would like feedback on this drawing so far, just don't tell me that I should throw it out of the window please :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 10 days ago

Critique would be appreciated

Hello! This is my first time drawing full body, and obviously its terrible. I am very embarrassed to post this here, but how I believe that I can learn faster this way. Soo I am curious, what can be improved here? That leg behind is giving me headaches so I just put it there, as someone told me "first make it exist then make it better later". Arm holding the wand is too big, but waving arm is too thin! Maybe I shouldn't draw her proportions perfectly since she will be in her dress? I would like feedback on this drawing so far, just don't tell me that I should throw it out of the window please :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 10 days ago
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What do you think of this so far? I am a bit insecure about distance between the eyes. I think on the bottom one, that hole should be a little bit closer, but I am not sure. So far I am pretty happy how I managed to capture the character and how their eyes shine less, I will make them even duller on bottom 2 :)

u/Remarkable-Map-1254 — 11 days ago