Do I not have a story/ narrative in my application?
Hi, I’m an international student planning to apply as a Math/Philosophy/Economics major, and I’ve recently started worrying that my application doesn’t have a strong enough “story.”
For background my application is pretty math-heavy/theoretical:
- Attending RSI this summer
- Ross Math 2024 + 2025
- ISEF 2025 (Math)
- Research assistant for a Philosophy of Mathematics project under a Cambridge professor
- Internship at a local quantitative research firm focused on math/econ applications
- Member of my country’s national debate team competing at WSDC
Recently, my school hosted a session with one of the top counseling companies in my country, and a lot of their successful applicants seemed to spikes like:
- CS to improve healthcare
- Math for environmental engineering/climate work, etc.
That made me wonder whether my application feels too “academic for the sake of academics.” Most of my interests are genuinely centered around studying math because I love it, especially the theoretical/philosophical side, rather than because I want to frame it as solving a specific world problem (which the counselling firm claimed presents a "more compelling narrative.")
So my question is: for top US colleges, is it completely fine to present yourself as someone deeply intellectually interested in math/philosophy/econ for their own sake? Or do admissions officers usually prefer applicants whose interests are tied to some broader social impact/application narrative? I’m trying to figure out whether I should lean into the authentic “pure intellectual curiosity” angle, or whether I should consciously shape my application around a more outward-facing application of math.