
Offering Free Screenplay & Story Feedback in Exchange for Honest Testimonials
Hey everyone,
I'm a story consultant and I've recently launched Story and Rhythm Notes (storyandrhythm.carrd.co) where I provide thoughtful feedback on screenplays, story outlines, and edited film projects.
To build relationships and gather testimonials, I'm offering FREE feedback for a limited number of 3 to 5 writers/filmmakers so I can ensure each project receives detailed and thoughtful notes.
Feel free to submit one of the following:
• The first 10 pages of a screenplay
• A story outline or synopsis
• A short edited film or scene (up to 10 minutes)
My focus is on structure, pacing, character development, and emotional impact. My goal is to help writers and filmmakers identify what is working, what may need strengthening, and where their story can resonate more deeply.
If you'd like detailed and constructive notes, feel free to send me a direct message or visit storyandrhythm.carrd.co
Looking forward to connecting and supporting your work.