u/NecessaryTest7789

LOOKOUT

78 pages, feature

Horror, thriller

Logline - A desperate fire lookout spends his summer in a national park searching for his lost mother when he accidentally stirs the interest of a mysterious cult who make his stay of life and death.

I’ve finally gotten to a point where I’m happy with this script but I’m sure there’s still ways to improve it so any issues or even just small details that you think would improve it please let me know. Thank you so much for reading.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RQRahPM-tbWHHLai6Ythh7LwNw3\_AHtS/view?usp=drivesdk

As I would I assume is common among writers, I’m much more interested in the actual script writing than I am the with the logline that goes with it but, considering this is a quite important of selling/marketing a script I was wondering how you learn to write them and, above all, write them well. I’m aware of the usual advice of ‘just keep writing them!’ But that doesn’t seem to be getting me anywhere.