u/Medium-Table-9884

This is a lyric i literally just wrote, and want to know if i'm any good. What are some recommendations you suggest? this is probably the chorus of an uncompleted song.

You got into your parents vodka drawer

laughing because you can’t taste it anymore

kissing her sun tinted skin, fall into her rip current

while my bottled letters pollute the shore

also can you tell me your interpretation of it THANKS