u/Mama-Bear-2012

"What if I had chosen differently? What would have happened?" 

Who hasn't asked that question before? One woman was asking herself that very question moments before the accident that left her in a coma. She unknowingly witnesses her own life while being guided by someone who feels familiar but is unrecognizable.

I am looking for readers to give feedback specifically on pacing, believability, and character depth. Please consider the following questions as you read:

1. Where did you want to skip ahead?
2. Was there anything that didn't ring true — a character reaction, a detail, a moment that felt off?
3. Did the relationships feel earned?
4. Did you care about Missy by the end?
5. Was there a character you wanted more of — or didn't buy?
6. If you didn't finish, where did you stop and what made you put it down?
7. If you did finish, what do you want more of?

PDF available via Google Drive link. Open to swaps with similar length and genre.

TW:

• Alcoholism/substance abuse
• Domestic control/emotional abuse
• Coercive control
• Medical emergency/coma