u/LuUomoPazzo

hello guys, recently I worked on my first video. I'm a student and I foolishly thought color grading wasn't important. So I spent days going crazy on wheels until I achieved a result that looked natural, but it still looked very ugly, so I watched a couple of tutorials and the results are these:

Do you have any other suggestions for improvement?

I filmed the whole thing with a Lumix s5d, with the kit lens 18-40mm a photographic tripod, a negative fill and a silver bounce at 4pm in natural light.

I could have avoided some mistakes, but I don't have enough experience and I don't have a bright enough monitor, so I saw almost everything black. It's my first project and this is my first time editing so I would be happy if you could help me with that too