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1-page cinematic short screenplay (~1 min) – river scene | feedback appreciated
u/Loud-Software-5646 — 5 days ago
Hi everyone,
I wrote my first short screenplay. It’s a very short cinematic scene (around 30–60 seconds) called “My Beatrice.”
I don’t have access to actors, a camera team, or filmmaking resources in my area, but I would really love to see this scene filmed someday.
It’s a simple emotional story about love, regret, and loss, set by a river.
I’m looking for:
Filmmakers who enjoy short emotional projects
Students or indie creators who might want to film something small
Any feedback on the script or how I could improve it for filming
I’m not trying to sell anything — I just want to see if this could become a real short film.
If anyone is interested, I can share the full script here.
Thank you for reading.