u/Key-Training9931

Hi everyone,

I just finished my first feature film script called Falling for Delilah. I used Studiobinder to format, so please ignore the scene numbers. Just learning the ropes (of formatting).

Logline: A disciplined college freshman falls for a beautiful, emotionally complicated girl who slowly becomes the greatest temptation of his life.

Any feedback is appreciated. I love constructive criticism!

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OONPSh6xGKWRqqW7Cu1j95fSHXLkQUZI/view?usp=drive_link