u/KestraNarassi

Contains violence and a vague description of heinous crimes.

I am looking for general feedback. Would you keep reading? Is anything confusing? Is the prose good? Is the character interesting? Any thoughts or advice is welcome.

Google Docs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RYZ0hJh44i9z_eoWI39hKTnyY_OogNBoJ8NsPslBmdE/edit?usp=sharing

edit: Anyone commenting in a way that sounds like they are taking credit for this work but who is not this account is not me. As of this edit, three different accounts have pretended to be me.