Jason Todd Fanfic critiques.
So this Fanfic is within the DC universe and deals directly with Jason Todd and Amelia (OC). This is a soulmate AU story with a twist. I write and edit it myself, but have found that hits and comments are lacking. I'm not sure as to why, but I'm curious if it's my writing style. Is it objectively bad? If anyone can read any part of it and give me critiques, that would be appreciated. I just want this to resonate with readers of this fandom.