u/Internal_Reserve_495

My grade feels slightly inconsistent -- need advice

This is a football short I shot and edited last week. One of the main things I always struggle with in color is making a consistent look that actually carries through the entire film. I grade so long by the end I can no longer trust my eyes.

I'm going for a film emulation look here -- grainy, soft, imperfect, gritty. I'm using davinci resolve and am using a Kodak 2383 lut + film look creator, relation, grain, glow etc.

It feels like I can never find a good balance of contrast and saturation.

The shots I have the biggest issue with right now are the black and wight weight room ones toward's the end (they feel too washed out) , and the beginning slow motion ones with the lineman in front of the sun (too much contrast, looks too much like content and not film).

u/Internal_Reserve_495 — 3 days ago

I shot this coding scene in a small office. I put a bunch of practical lamps, put up a godox bouncing off a wall to fill and added some haze. I realize now I should have ND's the lamps or replaced the bulbs because the light is harsh, but is there a way I can soften the overall look in the grade? 

I use DR and I've already added nodes for grain, halation, film look creator, bloom etc. tried using the Kodak 2383 print but it looks terrible.

Sony a7siii, slog3, sgamut3cine
First shots are rec709 conversions, second are graded versions.

Goals: A soft warm, "filmic" look that supports the flow state our character has achieved in coding.

Right now to me it just looks like a YT video.

https://preview.redd.it/gv1kbfb8j0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=dfc0b554c108834e7cd168ed568bab32260ebe46

https://preview.redd.it/ve18ehx8j0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=847f18f70756a9400f5e0a31687bb06edd65c47e

https://preview.redd.it/huhtkwaaj0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=01db49548028cf2ab108784c987931249c276e57

https://preview.redd.it/2kbrkzibj0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=031f2e6333171c39e271d3756048b90070637505

https://preview.redd.it/6fst3tddj0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=58896951af4a5df84b71e86195aaaa436faa8f0f

https://preview.redd.it/lkpojbaej0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=358a27cb0ec3954607f0cf9586e1112ba2d09dde

https://preview.redd.it/ecljaffhj0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e66ececddc31cd78904aea7d6845209663d68fc0

https://preview.redd.it/ylorf1mij0zg1.jpg?width=1920&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=bdbbdccf7925273470baa52ca52527edd6b2dd1c

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u/Internal_Reserve_495 — 10 days ago