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Title: The Gruen Effect

Format: Feature

Page Length: 85

Genres: Horror, Mystery, Fantasy

Logline: A workaholic father and his rebellious high school dropout of a son join forces to save their family's shopping mall from being destroyed by an enigmatic shopkeeper and his shop full of eclectic trinkets. 

Feedback: I'm mainly looking for a copy editor to help with any grammar, syntax, or spelling errors. It seems to be my biggest downfall when coming to writing. I'm also open to seeing if the twists work and that the payoff is earned in the end.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qFVAw0i4DlxSBL9wvJsjQW0HnJ01HsaU/view?usp=sharing

Too make it brief, I've been trying to network and meet other writers/producers but I keep hitting dead ends. I've tried contests, cold querying, and writers groups, but nothing's ever stuck with me. I do get results when I try either of the three whether it be good feedback or chatting with a producer, but it doesn't really encourage me to keep going this path. I want to write, I want to make stories reality and I want to show others my insane ideas, but I seem to lacking the drive too do it. I don't have any problem with the writing, it's just the selling aspect of it. Any tips for someone whose just ready to say, screw it?