[Complete] [94k] [ Super natural Transhumanist tragedy] At The End of The Enlightenment
General information
I am on me second editing draft, of At The End of the Enlightenment. While the manuscript is complete I will be giving it, on a chapter by chapter, after the second edit is done. This will be done in by updates in a google doc. Wich I will DM to you.
At The End of The Enlightenment, is the second book. In the Jelly Donut Trilogy. Sitting as a Prequel, To The Great Compensation. The following books are Necessary reading for the third and Final book. A Jelly Donuts Lullaby, but can be read as stand alone books if desired.
This book is adult literary fiction, and may make some readers uncomfortable.
Content warning This book contains:
Sexual Violence, extreme gore and violence, suicidal ideation, genocidal ideation.
“I have come to learn that life's worth is one hundred thousand dollars.” The same fire that has burnt through Unity's childhood, has come to take the home, and occupation. Leaving Unity walking on two left boots to reclaim what they have lost.
The sun has been absent for months. The U.S Remains in a torrential downpour. Unity is left to wander among the weeds, pursuing the victims of the contract. When she calls an old friend. Hoping to reclaim a failed relationship. Attaching herself to his life. Caught up with his relationship with a roommate soon to be on death row. Giving her one last hurrah, a road trip through storm ridden America. Unity isolated from her desire. Is left to confront the strangeness of her biology. Born from a test tube, Unity does not suffer the same ailments. Aging slower, unaffected by illness and fire proof; she is isolated from its consequence just as much as its pleasures.
What type of critique am I looking for:
Tone, color, rhythm.
General, grammar, and clarity.
Plot, Characters, direction of the story.
I am wiling to do critique swap.