u/IcyJournalist41

Synopsis: Emily lives in a girls home after being taken from her father, so when she meets a boy who also claims to live there, everything she thought she knew unravels. As her relationships unfold to show her the reality that she has run from, her decisions have damaging, and even deadly consequences. TW: child abuse/child neglect

Type of feedback I’m looking for: Feedback over the storyline, pacing, and how I am handling the heavier topics in the novella.

Critique swap availability: DM me and I can email you the google doc.

I’ve never done this before so I’m figuring it out as I go, but thank you!