[In progress] [4,031] [Fantasy/Academy/political thriller] Children of the Shattered Sol
Hi!, I'm looking for a few bata readers. Would like opinions on on things like pacing, dialogue(particularly if they're to expo dumping), discription and general first impressions. I'm not looking to swap, sorry.
Blurb:
In a Victorian world where magic and spirits are a regular part of everyday life, Zeda Bloodhorn, a cat demi-human swordswoman, takes her first steps into a new chapter of her life along with her lively twin "sister" Gloria to attend the prestigious Royal University of Stanverd. But beneath everything, like a mountain of pressure, lie expectations tied to her powerful family, the political intrigue of the student council, and questions about her own motives for the goals she has been working toward. As Zeda's journey in Stanverd continues, she meets faces new and old and tries to make a legacy of her own by becoming the Champion Knight.
DM me if interested, might take some time to respond due to time zone issues. Thank you in advance ^^