
What would Shaff think about this Script/Screenplay?
It still being revised!

It still being revised!
Feedback is Welcome! :) Note: I'm still revising a lot!
The Super Mario Galaxy Movie 2
And the Plot should kinda be like this: With the Koopalings being the villains and kidnapping peach as Mario and Luigi with the help of Yoshi in another Kingdom solving problems, get a message from a Luma that there has been a invasion in the mushroom kingdom so it's up to Mario and Rosalina's friend Lubba to search for her on the Starship Mario and stop those naferious Koopalings from conquering and kidnapping at a much Bigger Scale!
(Also they will visit some planets! from Mario Galaxy 1 and 2!)
(And Luigi and Yoshi maybe stay at Daisys Kingdom to investigate a mystery maybe Wart)
The Super Mario Galaxy Movie 2
And the Plot should kinda be like this: With the Koopalings being the villains and kidnapping peach as Mario and Luigi with the help of Yoshi in another Kingdom solving problems, get a message from a Luma that there has been a invasion in the mushroom kingdom so it's up to Mario and Rosalinas friend Lubba to search for her and stop those naferious Koopalings from conquering and kidnapping at a much Bigger Scale!
(also they'd get help from Rosalina and ride the starship Mario from Galaxy 2 going to explore several planets)
(Hopefully this plot makes sense!?)