u/HerederoDeAlberdi

I'm making a magic system based around the concept of Strand (Thread/String), what do each of these symbols make you think of?

I'm making a magic system based around the concept of Strand (Thread/String), what do each of these symbols make you think of?

For instance, these are the 5 "Applications" of Strand.

u/HerederoDeAlberdi — 8 hours ago

Symbol Feedback: STRAND

Without getting into too much detail because I myself don't have them yet, Strand is the underlying energetic layer of reality that defines how matter behaves (Similar to how the string theory proposes, though this isn't supposed to be a scientifically accurate magic system at all). Its basically the spiritual equivalent of atoms.

Physical Matter is a stable expression of strand, and it gains its properties from strand, If Iron is durable and malleable, it obtains those properties from the strands that compose it, and this is the case with all matter. Strand is basically a second-layer to matter that can be manipulated, instead of interacting with the matter itself you are interacting with its properties and aspects (as such, depleting the strand on a body of matter will cause it to lose its properties) there's a lot more but it doesn't matter, this explanation probably doesn't make a lot of sense because I'm still deciding on some stuff wich would make me change these definitions a lot, I'm trying to pin down the vibe and visual style so I can keep going more easily since I'm a very visual person. Anyways, yada yada there are people who can manipulate strand and there's 5 ways/disciplines to do it, and that's what these symbols represent.

The one in the center represents Strand itself, Then starting from the top and going clock-wise, on the top is Strandsight, the ability to sense and discern strands, its the most basic as its required for everything else, this later can evolve onto a sensory net, etc.

Next comes StrandWeave, the ability to weave strand within one's own body, this can achieve from bodily enhancement to manipulation of the body like applying the properties of certain strands.

Then comes StrandBind, the ability to bind and interfere with the strands of another living being, this is different because it involves interacting with strand that has its own will that is actively working against yours.

We have StrandShape, The ability to Shape and materialize one's own strands into stable, durable and persisting constructs. You can make a sword, materialize projectiles in the air, a barrier, or simply create strand items, this the ability used by Strandlooms in their craft.

Finally StrandGrasp, the ability to grasp and manipulate Loose Strand (Unbound Strand, strand that has no living owner) from the environment (constructs created through StrandShape that have already left the body are considered Loose strand, although it will respond to you better.

Do you think these symbols represent those concepts accurately, and do you find them visually cohesive and attractive? I tried to make them all easily recognizable.

u/HerederoDeAlberdi — 12 hours ago

Recommendations after finishing the Cradle Series?

The aspects I like the most were:

The power system: I like that its hard enough while still having a lot of versatility and variety, there are a thousand different paths, and that's not even counting constructs and other items, or things like Blood shadows, etc, the power system is also properly intertwined with the narrative and character conflicts that it doesn't feel just like a power tool (Such as the relationship between Yerin and Blerin, or Jai Long's deformed face).

This is also my first cultivation story (with the exception of LOTM, if you consider it cultivation) and I've enjoyed it quite a bit, so I'm open to checking out more in the genre.

The Characters: There isn't a point in talking about individual characters, what I really loved was the group setting and slowly seeing the gang travel to different places, grow together and get close to each other.

The world setting was alright, I must say i was never particularly interested in the abidan and out-of-cradle setting, especially since this is the reason we basically saw nothing aside from ashwind continent. I prefer worlds that are explored throughly rather than being told of all these other places and never seeing them.

The last element I'll highlight and that really surprised me from this book is the romance, Lindon and Yerin's relationship was so much better than I expected from a story like this and its handled so well, departing a lot from most usual romance tropes wich is fitting because these two are anything but normal. This relationship single-handedly made me completely revalue my opinion of romance in these "shonen-like" stories, so I'd really like to see something similar in other works.

I've heard nothing quite scratches the Cradle itch but I'd still like to know.

And obviously, I'd prefer for it to have progression elements. And I don't mind if they're translated novels and such.

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u/HerederoDeAlberdi — 3 days ago