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Blackened rock of beautiful colors
Laid with me
Basking light
Alit the abyss like hot summer’s leaked oil
Crossed arms
Tight lips
Brilliant the rainbow that only light evokes
Intentionlessly showed
Life under gloomed stratum
All I see are beautiful colors of a black rock
Onyx’s aurora
(How can I improve? What’re your thoughts?)
u/GreenSun24 — 10 days ago