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Dear Hr Team
Greetings,
My name is XX, and I’m a Financial Sciences graduate with distinction (GPA: 4.7/5) from XX University. I’m very interested in starting my career in your company.
During my internship at XX as an Accountant, I supported the preparation of financial statements, developed Excel-based forecasting models, and assisted with internal audit procedures aligned with IFRS standards. This experience enhanced my skills in budgeting, variance analysis, and financial reporting, and deepened my understanding of how analytical work supports business decisions.
Additionally, I have obtained the CME-1 certification which has enriched my understanding of financial markets, investment products and regulatory frameworks in the XX capital market.
In addition to my academic and professional experiences, I volunteered as a member of my university’s Finance Club, where I contributed to financial literacy initiatives and collaborated with professionals to increase student engagement. Recently, I also joined XX Bank’s Skills Development Initiative.
As a fresh graduate, I’m keen to contribute to your team and grow within your Financial Department team. I’m available at your convenience for further discussion via phone or email.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,