u/Fit_Sprinkles1642

Hey guys, I made a story that I originally wrote for absurd and edgy and chaotic purposes, but found myself really start leaning into other elements, like how well written the main antagonist should be. It doesn't get serious until 75% of the way through, and I thought I did good with the finale in terms of making it well paced and leaned into how disturbed and prideful the main villain was, but there is a lot-A LOT-of profanity in this-and violence. Like in every other sentence. But that's the point of it-to be absurd and satirical for the sake of it while also making it interesting. Then, I got obsessed with consistency which I hope is a good thing because now, since I felt pretty good about it, I wanted to give this story essentially 2 more sequels (total of 3) and think it would help delve into why pretty much every character, even the MC, in the story is corrupt and/or violent and at this point, there is no way I can NOT world-build since the house/tiny environment the first story took place in basically imploded with violence and crime so emergency responses have to get involved. I would really appreciate any tips on what to do with this because I'm now completely serious on trying to make these next 2 have the same themes of absurdity and chaos while also having more serious moments like backstories or emotional moments.