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Original I wrote this:
The enforcer pulled out a long pipe from his saddlebag, a folded piece of parchment paper, and a long metal needle. He unfolded the paper, gathered honey-colored opium on the needle, and leaned forward towards the popping fire.
The opium began to sizzle and pop the longer he held it above the flame. Once it was heated he rolled it into a small bead, dropping it into the pipe, and holding it above the flame. He then leaned back taking a long drag while it bubbled.
Deepseek editing my work:
The enforcer pulled a long pipe from his saddlebag, along with a folded square of parchment and a slender metal needle. He unfolded the paper, gathered a dab of honey-colored opium onto the needle’s tip, and leaned toward the popping fire.
The opium began to sizzle and spit the longer he held it above the flame. Once it softened, he withdrew the needle and rolled the drug into a small, glistening bead.
He thumbed it into the pipe’s bowl and cradled it over the heat. Then he leaned back, slow, and took a long drag while it bubbled.